Monday, March 28, 2016

3/28

Grievous (v)- causing grief and pain

Flounder (n)- a fish


*use in one sentence :)

*Synthesis essay: list important points

34 comments:

  1. The cast of Deadliest Catch is often in a grievous state due to their lack of lobster catching and abundance of flounder finding.

    Thesis
    Circular argument
    Facts
    Direct quotations
    Credible sources (in text citations and works sited page)
    Conclusion

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  2. A Flounder is commonly used in fried fish sandwiches because it is light and flaky.
    The death of the family member was grievous, they could not stop crying.
    -thesis statement
    -in text citations
    -supporting evidence

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  3. General Grievous and Flounder were locked in eternal battle for the fate of the world.

    Read the prompt
    Create an organization chart
    Analyze the sources
    Have a well stated thesis
    Use the sources to explain your thesis

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  4. The flounder was caught by the grievous hook and made into sushi.

    Important points of the synthesis essay
    Make clear what is being written
    Use sources
    not a summary
    Organize research
    Draw further significance from the reasons and evidence present

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  5. Joe felt grievous after catching and killing the flounder

    -Use an engaging hook
    -Identift the issue
    -Use a clear thesis
    -Use concrete/abstract ideas
    -explain how and why
    -use fully developed points
    -have a strong conclusion

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  6. Suffering from GRIEVOUS wounds inflicted by the spear fisherman, a group of FLOUNDER floated on the surface of the lake, bleeding and virtually deceased.

    Important Points of Synthesis Essay:
    1. Examine the topic and determine your stance on the issue
    2. Must be persuasive
    3. Use the number of source documents indicated (if not more), but do not provide outside/personal information
    4. Incorporate thesis statement into first paragraph
    5. Creates new knowledge; NOT A SUMMARY!
    6. 40 minutes to write; 15 minutes to plan and read documents; 55 minutes total
    7. It is beneficial to form an outline to gather important points and stay organized.
    8. Incorporate a large amount of information that is analyzed and dissected in a short period of time

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  7. The evil man did not take the hook out of the flounder's mouth after catching it, so the man grievously let it back into the water.

    1. Have an engaging hook
    2. Identify the issue
    3. Clear thesis
    4. Use the provided sources to support evidence
    5. Explains the significance of the supporting evidence
    6. Restate thesis using different words
    7. Have a thoughtful ending

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  8. General Grievous was actually killed by a flounder, not Obi ka Noobie

    Synthesis Essay:
    - Use at least the required amount of documents stated to support your argument
    - Develop a strong thesis (make a claim)
    - Don't use documents in introductory and concluding paragraphs
    - Do not summarize

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  9. It was a grievous day when the boy's pet flounder died.

    Abstract ideas
    concrete illustration
    answer the prompt specifically
    develop points fully
    be clear and direct
    use the sources correctly
    support with evidence
    only use the sources you fully understand
    do not bring in out side information

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  10. The flounder was grievous towards his prey.

    Thesis
    In Text Citations
    Explain yourself
    Don't make it a summary
    Include credible sources

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  11. Macy's attitude about vacation turned from overjoyed to grievous the instant a flounder swam against her legs in the ocean.

    1. Engaging hook/beginning of the essay
    2. State the issue at hand
    3. Clear thesis statement
    4. Topic sentence- support thesis
    5. Explain
    6. Specific supporting evidence
    7. Document all sources
    8. Explain support/evidence
    9. Thoughtful ending

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  12. The grievous townspeople laid the boy on a raft and set his shrine to sea so that his dead body may be eaten by the flounder and other fish.

    Hook
    Thesis
    Supporting paragraphs
    Citing evidence
    conclusion

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  13. The grievous fisherman caused the flounder terrible pain by letting it die slowly in the open air.

    Strong thesis statement
    Use of facts from the provided sources
    Keep research organized
    Put most important parts first
    Conclusion

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  14. Due to my terrible ichthyophobia every time I see a flounder or other such fish it is most grievous.

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    1. Clear Thesis
      Use of Pathos Logos and Ethos
      Citing sources
      Conclusion

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  15. After losing his flounder the grievous child cried.

    Thesis
    Supporting Points
    In text citations
    Conclusion

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  16. General Grievous was grievous as I smite him with my flounder.

    Clear Thesis
    Pathos, Logos, Ethos
    Research/Citations

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  17. I felt very grievous after my father's death by flounder.
    Sources
    Facts
    Strong Wordage
    Powerful opening thesis
    Solid conclusion
    Always wrap back around to your opening point

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  18. The flounder was hit by the grievous spear, falling slowly to the bottom of the ocean he realized he was dying.

    Study the sources
    Construct a strong thesis
    If you have time create some transition sentences
    Begin Writing with a clear focused point
    Make sure to clearly answer the prompt
    Include 4 or more sources
    Direct quote the Sources
    Strong philosophical conclusion

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  19. The grievous fisherman caught the flounder in a harsh manner.

    Engaging hook
    Identify
    Thesis statement
    Explain
    Supporting evidence
    Citations

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  20. When the man caught a flounder, it put a positive spin on the rainy, grievous fishing trip.

    Thesis
    citations
    no summary
    explain the significance of evidence that supports your claim

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  22. Ariel had a best friend names Flounder but he was not a flounder.
    The grievous attack on Pearl Harbor still triggered sorrow one it's centennial.

    Strong thesis
    Analysis of 3+ documents
    Develop strong points related back to thesis
    NOT a summary of sources
    Answer prompt articulately

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  23. The flounders' painful death caused the man to feel grievous.

    thesis
    sources
    circular argument
    direct quotes
    solid conclusion

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  25. It was a grievous morning when the family awoke to find deceased flounder in their pond.

    citing provided sources
    no references to previously known information
    thesis

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  26. The grievous little boy was taken by surprise when his first flounder catch.

    1. Hook
    2. Strong Thesis statement
    3. Use information provided
    4. Conclusion

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  27. When the flounder smacked jason across the face, he experienced grievous pain.
    Thesis
    Use good transition sentences
    A good hook
    supporting details
    citations
    supporting evidence
    direct quotes from the source

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  28. The flounder caused my baby cousin to encounter his first experience of grievous after he died.

    Thesis
    support (direct quotes, in-text citations, stats)
    counter argument (why it's wrong)
    conclusion

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  29. Flounder was grievous all before and after Ariel's wedding because he thought that he would loose her forever.
    An important point to keep in mind while writing a synthesis essay is to understand what the topic is the writer is talking about. Not writing about the write topic can land you at the most of a two.

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  30. After an intense struggle, I inflicted a grievous wound on the flounder with my harpoon, guaranteeing my victory.

    Thesis
    Analyzation of sources but not summary
    Support (use of information provided)
    Counter Argument
    Conclusion

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  31. After an intense struggle, I inflicted a grievous wound on the flounder with my harpoon, guaranteeing my victory.

    Thesis
    Analyzation of sources but not summary
    Support (use of information provided)
    Counter Argument
    Conclusion

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  32. Marcus went fishing with his father and caught a flounder, it started flopping around as if he was grievous from the hook.

    -Strong and understanding thesis statement, something to hook the reader
    -Explaination of the topic without summarizing or putting word for word
    -Facts with correct in-text citations and relating to the topic
    -Clear and straight to the point conclusion

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