Friday, January 29, 2016

Peer Edit Groups (2/1)



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           Today's vocabulary.  Write two sentences (no activity for the journal).

           hegemony (n)-  influence or control over another country, a group of people, etc
equivocate (v)-  to use unclear language especially to deceive or mislead someone


Today's class & instructions:




      You will be peer editing today.  Mr. Rogers will pass out your peer editing sheet.  There are two.  This paper goes with your example essay.  

     *This is a very simple peer edit sheet.  Please fill out every, single section.  Make marks and comments on your partner's paper.  Discuss your marks with them.  This should be a discussion.  Make sure they have all requirements from the assignment paper and the PA State Writing Rubric:  http://www.iu9.org/view/127.pdf

You are in groups of four. 
Numbers 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 switch papers for the first edit.  Numbers 1 & 3 and 2 & 4 switch for the second edit.  If you have a group of 5, just make sure to get two different people.  If someone is absent, just pass your paper in a circle to complete two edits.


   Mod 1:



1- Ian
2- Grace

3- Eric
4- Mikey


1- Stefany
2- Shelby
3- Emma
4- Ben



1. Itzel
2. Michael Y
3. Khai
4. Ryan




1. Ricky
2. Kat
3. David
4. Brenda


Mod 2:



1. Drew
2. Aaron
3. Jake
4. Janet
5. Olivia

1. Rachel
2. Ellena
3. Becka
4. Madi
5. Katie

1. Gill
2. Joanna
3. Jason
4. Amanda

1. John
2. Emma
3. Leah
4. Tyler






        When you are finished, please read the following:
                   Subject/Strategies book- What is description?- p. 154-157; 160-164....your only assignment is to revise your paper for Wednesday.